By Jason Frelich · Published

How to Write a Service Page That Ranks on Google and Turns Visitors Into Calls

A typewriter with a half typed sheet beside a laptop, a mug and a stack of index cards on a wooden desk

The service page is the page that does the work. The homepage introduces the business; the service page is where someone who needs a fence, a will or a website decides whether to call you. It is also the page Google ranks for the searches that pay: "fence installation Noblesville," "estate planning attorney Carmel," "web design Fishers." And it is the page most small business sites get wrong, with three sentences, a stock photo and a button.

Here is how to write one that ranks and converts, with a template at the end. We write service pages for clients at $200 a page and the copywriting page has the details. This is the method.

Start with the phone call

Before writing anything, write down the questions customers ask when they call about this service. What does it cost. How long does it take. Do you come to my town. Are you licensed. What is included. What happens first. Those questions, answered plainly, are the page. Everything else is decoration. If you answer them well, the page ranks because it matches what people search, and it converts because it removes the reasons people hesitate.

The words to use

Use the customer's words, not the industry's. People search for "fence company" and "fence installation," not "perimeter solutions." They search for "website design" more than "digital presence." Add the town, because local searches include it and because a page that says where you work is a page Google can match to a place. The main phrase goes in the page title, the headline and the first paragraph, and then you write like a person and stop counting.

The structure

This order works for a trade, a firm, a practice or a studio, because it follows how a visitor reads.

1. The headline: what and where

"Fence Installation in Noblesville and Hamilton County." "Estate Planning for Carmel Families." "Web Design for Fishers Small Businesses." The service, the place, and nothing clever. The visitor and Google both know what the page is about in one line.

2. The first paragraph: who it is for and what they get

Two or three sentences. Who you do this for, what the result is, and the one thing that sets you apart (speed, a warranty, a price, that the owner does the work). This paragraph is often what Google shows in the search result, so write it to be read on its own.

3. The action, above the fold

A phone number that dials and a short form, before the visitor scrolls. Everything below is for people who want more convincing. Many do not.

4. What is included

A plain list of what the service covers and what it does not. Customers are reassured by specifics and suspicious of adjectives. "Daily backups, security updates, SSL and content changes in under 48 hours" is worth more than "comprehensive, world class support."

5. How it works

Three to five steps from first contact to finished job. People hesitate when they do not know what calling will set in motion. "Tell us about the job. A written quote within two days. We schedule, we do the work, we clean up." That is it.

6. What it costs

A starting price if you can give one, a range if you cannot, and what moves it. "From $5,000; the number of pages and who writes the content are the biggest factors." A page with a price filters out people who were never going to hire you and reassures the ones who were. Our prices are on every service page and on the pricing page.

7. Proof

A photo of real work, a review with a name and a town, a result with a number if you have one. BMZ Law told us their site brought 40% more inquiries, and that line does more on a page than any paragraph we could write about ourselves.

8. Questions people ask

The phone call questions from the start, as a short FAQ. These are the exact phrases people type into Google, and a page that answers them can appear for each one.

9. The action again

For the people who read all of it. A sentence about what happens next and the form.

What to leave out

History of the company (that is the about page). Mission statements. Stock photos. Jargon. Three paragraphs about how important the service is before saying what you do. Anything you would not say to a customer on the phone.

Service page or landing page?

A service page is for traffic that finds you through search: deep, linked from the menu, part of the site. A landing page is for traffic you send from an ad or an email: one offer, one action, no menu. They often share an offer and a form, and a business running ads usually needs both. We explain the difference in what is a landing page.

The template

Copy this, fill in the brackets, and you have a first draft.

  • Title: [Service] in [Town] | [Business name]
  • Headline: [Service] for [who] in [Town] and [area]
  • Opening: We [do the service] for [who] in [area]. [What they get, in one sentence.] [What sets you apart.]
  • Action: Call [number] or request a quote below. [What happens next.]
  • What is included: [five to eight plain items]
  • How it works: [three to five steps]
  • What it costs: From [$X]. [The two things that move the price.]
  • Proof: [one photo, one review with name and town, one number if you have it]
  • Questions: [five questions customers actually ask, answered in two or three sentences each]
  • Closing: [One sentence.] Call [number] or send the form.

If you would rather not write it

Most owners get halfway through the template and stall, because writing about your own business is harder than running it. That is normal. Copywriting is $200 a page with us, or included in the $200 a month Small Business plan: we interview you, draft the page in your voice, and you correct what is not how you would say it. If you want to go further and have the pages rank, that is the content part of any SEO plan, from $600 a month. For blog posts rather than service pages, our guide to writing an effective blog covers the differences.

Run your site through the free website grader to see how the current pages score, then tell us which services you want more of. Jason replies in under 24 hours.

Frequently asked questions

What owners ask when they sit down to write the pages.

Long enough to answer every question a customer would ask on the phone, which usually lands between 600 and 1,200 words. Pages with real substance tend to rank better than thin ones, but padding does not count. Every paragraph has to earn its place.

Every service you want more of, yes. One page per service lets each rank for its own searches and speak to its own customer. A single services page with a list ranks for nothing in particular.

The words your customers say on the phone, plus the town. 'Fence installation Carmel,' not 'premium perimeter solutions.' Use the main phrase in the title, the headline and the first paragraph, and then write naturally.

Yes, and this template is built for that. If you would rather not, copywriting is $200 a page with us, or included in the Small Business plan. Most owners find that a draft from us with their corrections is faster than starting from a blank page.

If you can give a starting price, yes. 'From $X' answers the question every visitor has, filters out the people who were never going to hire you, and is the single most searched phrase in most trades. Our prices are on every service page and on the pricing page.

Google Search Console shows which searches the page appears for and how often it is clicked. Your phone and your form tell you the rest. If the page gets visits and no calls, the problem is the page. If it gets neither, the problem is the search.

Jason Frelich

Jason Frelich

Lead Web Designer and Developer at Lackey Designs. The company has been around since 2006, and Jason brings 20 years of design and development experience to every site he builds. More about Jason

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